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/cheer!
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Now dont get me wrong, i will give you some negative feedback, but i really like the img.
It feels a little bit too much random, and im not a fan of all the coloured " lines" in the render.
As stated above, you should move the focal point.
The focal point is too bright, its hard to see all the detail.
You should remove the green parts of the render eventhough they are pretty hard to notice, they spoile the piece.
Well, i hope you dont hate me now
I really like the concept, if you do the same thing in a higher res and a little more detail, then you will have a fav.
Overall its a really good job, keep it up mate.
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I also really like the color of it but the text looks funny
keep it up buddy~
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lighting is nice..
maybe a diff. color?
but this is still great.
impressive work
mP
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